The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.

The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.
The given line graph illustrates the number of
stores
that closed and recently opened in one country from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the total number of shop closures and openings decreased during the given years.
Additionally
, both two graphs reveal fluctuating trends. In 2011, the
stores
which were opened accounted for the most rate among other years and almost 9000.
Moreover
, both closures and opening trend experienced their plunge amount in 2012 around 6000 and 4000, respectively. After that, there was a significant decrease in 2014. Meanwhile, by 2015, the latter number dropped to below 1000,
then
rocketed in 2016. As is shown by the graph, in the
last
three years of the period, the proportions of closing
stores
witnessed more increase compared to the launching new
stores
.
Furthermore
,
while
, the winding up of the
stores
inclined in 2018, there was a decline in terms of inauguration.
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