The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
bar graph illustrates,
five different four main Australian cities, the outcome of an investigation into citizen's consumption of Remove the comma
apply
tea
and coffee
, and how often Australians drink them. Overall
, the percentage
of people
who bought fresh coffee
in the last
4 weeks
was the lowest throughout the whole time frame, while
in all cities, except Adelaide, those who went to a cafe for coffee
or tea
in last
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the last
weeks
were the highest.
To begin
with, the percentage
of people
who bought fresh coffee
was between approximately 34% and 43%. On the other hand
, those who bought instant coffee
in the last
4 weeks
raged above 45% and around 54%. Adelaide was the only country where the percentage
of people
who bought instant coffee
in the last
4 weeks
exceeded the figure of those who went to a cafe for coffee
or tea
in the last
4 weeks
, by almost 50%.
Turning to the percentage
of people
who went to a cafe for coffee
or tea
in the last
4 weeks
, Melbourn accounted for the largest figure at roughly 63%, which was nearly the same as Hobart's number. However
, Adelaide was the smallest number at under 50%.Submitted by songcheng619 on
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