he given chart illustrates the level of serious violent crime namely rape, robbery, aggravated assault and homicide between 1978 and 2000.
The line graph describes
,
the significant violent Remove the comma
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crime
including rape, robbery, aggravated assault and homicide from the years 1978 to 2000 in the US.
To summarize, in the given period the total violent crime
stood first throughout the year
while
people arrested for violent crimes were last
witnessed in the US.
In the year
1978, in the US the serious violent crime
level was 0.25 offences
in thousands and 0.75 offences
in thousands in arrests for violent crime
and crime
recorded by police
respectively. Till the year
1986, offences
for the same slightly increased, whereas
mid of the year
1986 to 1990 people arrested declined and then
immediately inclined in the minimal range until 2000. On the flip side, crimes recorded by police
were continuously processed throughout the year
.
In the year
1978, the total violent crime
and victimisations reported to police
in the US was 2.25 offences
and 3.5 offences
orderly. However
, the offence level was up and down till half of the year
1990. On the contrary
, offences
in thousands started reducing in total violent crime
and victimisation reported to the police
with 3 offences
and 1.5 offences
admittedly.Submitted by gs250485 on
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