You have heard about a plan to build new apartments in a public park near your home. You want to give your opinion about this. Write a letter to the local council . In your letter: ➢ Explain how you and your family use the park ➢ explain why the park is important for the local society ➢ Describe the possible effects on local people if the park is destroyed?

Dear
sir
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/madam, I am writing with regard to the proposed project of replacing a public
park
with an apartment complex.
First,
I would like to stress how much important
this
park
is to me. My family and I daily use the
park
to walk and do
the
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exercise.
Whereas
my kids love to play there with their other friends. I
also
believe that
this
park
has an integral role in other society people. As I saw many senior citizens, teenagers and adults there during the evening doing different activities.
This
place holds a very special significance in every age group. If you do abolish
this
place
then
local communities will be lost a treasury worth place which they use in their day-to-day life and it leads to negative effects on an individual’s physical and mental health. I hope you will consider these factors before making any decision. Yours faithfully. Akankasha
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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