Some people believ that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Talents like doctors and engineers are recommended to employ in the nation where they get trained. It is commonly supported, but a different point of view argues that working in a different or same country should be their choice.

This

essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter.

Firstly

this

highly skilled manpower training is based on the local environment and resources ,

therefore

, if they opt to work locally, it will be more effective.

For example

, in Nepal, building construction generally occur on the hills which has soft soil and the technique used are generally derived from ancient construction works.

Thus

, if these engineers immigrate abroad, they may encounter various challenges related to their skills and background. But, if they remain in the same country, their experience will enhance the tools and technologies used here and there will be a chance to research their expertise.

However

, if they want to go abroad for employment opportunities, it will lead to a good chance of success for them

as well as

for the country.

This

is because there will occur knowledge transfer, technology transfer and a number of perspectives or solutions to a problem exists.

For example

, civil engineers of Nepal have regularly worked on truss ceilings but when they go to the Middle East for foreign employment, they get more opportunities to work on stroyed buildings.

This

gives them a chance to learn and transfer these skills upon their back to Nepal.

Therefore

, they should be free to choose their place of work. In my opinion, in spite of some benefits of practising engineering or medical ,professions the benefits of their mobility are outnumbered. Practicing their skill limits them to solve certain types of problems

whereas

their movements bring different solutions and different perspectives to solve a problem, and

also

knowledge base for different problems.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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