Task 2: In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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The agriculture sector is continuously developing in

order

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to provide better nutritional

food

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despite

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, there are many

people

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who are starving around the world. I believe it is because

prices

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food

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as become quite expensive throughout the world and to tackle

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issue

government

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officials have to indulge themselves and create certain policies regarding it. Agriculture has always been the most significant sector as humans are dependent on it for their survival. As new technologies started to get involved in

order

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to maintain the necessary nutrients which are ingrained in certain levels of

foods

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, the

prices

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of these

foods

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also

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started to skyrocket as well.

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has acted in

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a way that to some

people

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it hinders them to afford it.

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, there are many

people

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who belong to poor families in India, and for

them

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it is hard to sustain

such

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inflation rates for their daily survival

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they have to cut down most of their expenses when buying

food

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, sometimes they have to even skip meals

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it.

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, there is a solution to

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problem, the

government

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have to get involved in

order

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to save

people

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from hunger.

Government

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should initiate policies towards the betterment of their own country's citizens

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as policies containing strict laws on the

prices

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foods

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should be applied and

government

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should

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invest tax money on citizens to provide

food

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to financially deprived

people

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, even though

prices

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should be cut down,

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does not mean that the quality of

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should be compromised.

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, as new advancements are happening to the agriculture sector still there are individuals who are suffering from hunger around the world and

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due to

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heavy

prices

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which are been set on

foods

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while

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purchasing, and In

order

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to tackle

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problem

government

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involvement is needed.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

310 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

inequality
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access to resources
climate change
natural disasters
political factors
economic factors
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population growth
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Task 2: In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In many countries nowadays, more and more women have full-time jobs as men, so there is logic that men and women should share the housework tasks equally. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays transportation is a major problem in every developing city. Many people opine that it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than in public transport system. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Reading for pleasure can develop imagination and language skills better than watching TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who are choosing to educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do the advantages of home education outweigh the disadvantages?(nv)