Some people think cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in the countryside Discuss both views and give your own opinion

People often say that

cities

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are the

worthest

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worst

worthiest

place to settle down

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there are some opinions that living in the countryside is the best decision.

This

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writer

choose

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the former opinion

is

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as

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the best option and will show why in the

follow

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essay. When we talk about the advantages of

cities

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, we must talk about

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their

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comfortability

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comfort

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and convenience. Because of

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modernity, we can enjoy the hustle and bustle of

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city

life

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, or we could say that

cities

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have a lot of entertainment

medias

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to amuse and relax, so the

cities

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always

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are always

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bright and bustle, and the foods, clothes or other

stuffs

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stuff

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are

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luxurious, too.

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, the

cities

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have a lot of job opportunities to gain and there

are

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variety

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of works to apply

.

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, the countryside

have

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some things that

cities

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never have like the rate of crime is very low and there are not as noisy as

cities

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, what is more, the atmosphere is quite fresh and the percentage of traffic accidents is surprisingly low. The foods are very healthy and clean

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you do not need to be careful with the materials . The countryside

life

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can be said as a peaceful

life

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that

very

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fit

to

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elderlies and

who

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those who

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hate the

noisy

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noise

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and

crowd

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crowded

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of

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apply

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cities

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. For the reasons mentioned above, I think

the

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apply

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city

life

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is the best route because

i

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am the kind of

people

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person

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who is used to the

comfortability

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comfort

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of the

cities

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.