Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

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sleeping and they do not sleep enough.
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essay aimed to examine the main consequences of
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of sleep and possible solutions
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problem. The two main consequences of
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of sleep are health problems and loss of productivity.
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with, sleeping is the time, when many important processes occur in
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body,
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as digestion of
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food and fixing the learned material. During
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sleep,
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deactivates useless neuron connections and outputs dead cells and toxins.
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,
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of sleep can cause significant health problems and difficulties in memorizing.
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, sleeping gives us strength and energy,
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during the day, even he
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her does not get enough sleep. The possible solutions
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this
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problem are making
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sleep conditions and
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. It is common, that people cannot sleep, if there are
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not relaxed at all. Open the window before
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sleeping in the room to get fresh air, wear
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and choose comfort pose. In
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not work, get consultancy from the doctor. Often
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can be caused by psychological factors.
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, stress and anxiety can be
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, why you cannot get sleep.
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will give useful
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or prescribe the course of medicines.
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, some sicknesses and productivity
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be caused by
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of sleep,
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however
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we can prevent these consequences by sleeping in
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conditions or getting advice from
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a doctor
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Insomnia
  • Sleep deprivation
  • Sleep disorders
  • Sleep quality
  • Fatigue
  • Exhaustion
  • Restless
  • Restorative sleep
  • REM sleep
  • Circadian rhythm
  • Sleep hygiene
  • Napping
  • Sleep duration
  • Melatonin
  • Sleep-inducing
  • Drowsiness
  • Sleep disturbances
  • Obstructive sleep apnea
  • Snoring
  • Sleepwalking
  • Sleep talking
  • Shift work
  • Sleeping pills
  • Sleep aid
  • Relaxation techniques
  • Meditation
  • Deep breathing
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