Globalisation has highlighted the need for international communication. It is often argued that English should be compulsory subject for all school children around the world. Others argue that this would do more harm than good. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some individuals consider that
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should be obligatory a subject for all schools around the world in order to work with other
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a minimal amount of
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believe that it affects their country. In my opinion, I agree with
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is a required subject in school by the government. On the one hand, there are several reasons that the
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language is vital to
people
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,with starting a business,
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should have the same language to discuss and expand their business in other
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Secondly
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, those
people
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who look to study abroad need to have
English
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, if we come to Australia for studying and working, we need to learn
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.
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,
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think that
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is essential for them to find out opportunities around the world.
On the other hand
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, it threatens their
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when youngers learn
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and forget their mother languages.
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,
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preserve their national character as they do not willing children to use
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in conversation every single day.
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that, those who send out instructions and regulations for using mother tongue in working, school.
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, Japan sends out rules and forces
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who carry out these rules ,
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otherwise
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they will be penalised.
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, those who believe that protecting their culture via restricting to use of
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in conversation, is necessary . In my opinion, nowadays the world is open to everyone. I agree with
people
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who need to have
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to seek opportunities to live a happier and better life. In conclusion,
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it is understandable to think
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is important to every person
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open many opportunities for everyone. But others are feeling threat in their
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. In my opinion, I think
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is vital for all ages for learning and sharing with each other
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalisation
  • international communication
  • lingua franca
  • interconnected world
  • diplomacy
  • cultural exchange
  • cognitive benefits
  • brain function
  • dementia
  • school curricula
  • linguistic diversity
  • cultural heritage
  • financial burden
  • developing nations
  • preserving local languages
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