You recently booked a part-time course at a college. you now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter - say which part-time course you booked - explain why you need to cancel your booking - ask about booking a different course

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to know you that I recently booked a part-time

course

at a college but

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forget that

this

course

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want

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solve my problems so I have to cancel my booking right now

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want to give you all details so that it will be easy for you to understand clearly. my class was at morning 5am and my subject was marketing. I will be very sorry

for

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cancil

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cancel

part time

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course

at your

collage

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college

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. It was too early to

booked

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course

I just booked

single

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course

. There are many problems in my studies.I would like to book all

type

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subject

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so there will be

problem

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maybe if

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canciled

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cancelled

late I want to know

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there are different courses in your college or just a single one. If there are my types of

course

then

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will like to join

course

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the course

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in your college again. waiting for your reply kind regards Mary

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

163 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Part-time course
Cancellation
Booking
Administrator
Financial situation
Work commitments
Health issues
Inconvenience
Transfer
Subject area
Schedule
Format
Cancellation policy
Refund process
Assistance
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You recently booked a part-time course at a college. you now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter - say which part-time course you booked - explain why you need to cancel your booking - ask about booking a different course

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

The governments should give each citizen a basic income so that they have enough money to live on, even if they are unemployed. Do you agree or disagree?

In some places old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Archaeology is partly the discovery of treasures of the past, partly the work of the scientific analyst, partly the exercise of the creative imagination. Do you agree or disagree?

Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, promotion and as result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What can could be done to encourage people to buy local production