Some people think that cities best place to live. Others prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many individuals believe that moving to the big
cities
will give them a better life. They think that they will have many opportunities to develop. And it is a big problem that needs soluting by the government.
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Firstly
, a number of society want to live in the countryside because the air in the Linking Words
cities
will be polluted because of the gases from factories and transport. Use synonyms
Moreover
, they think the Linking Words
cities
are very noisy. To be honest, in the Use synonyms
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cities
there will be a lot of different traffic transports and Add a comma
,cities
also
is the cause of accidents. Linking Words
Besides
, it is safer than in the Linking Words
cities
, everyone is careful and friendly.
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, young people Linking Words
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want to move to the Linking Words
cities
rather than live in the countryside. Because there they will have a lot of opportunities to change themselves. Use synonyms
For example
, if they study in the Linking Words
cities
, they will have qualifications and study skills in school. So they will get a good job to make money to help the family. Use synonyms
Moreover
, they can use many modern equipment to help in life every day. They feel that life is better with proper, water sanitation systems, and electricity. When they work in the Linking Words
cities
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such
as pension and paid leave. Linking Words
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they will become prosperous.
In conclusion, we need to consider before deciding where we feel better living. I believe that Linking Words
cities
have more advantages than disadvantages for people because everyone has the same chances to have opportunities within their career and education.Use synonyms
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