Some children receive almost no encouragement from their parents regarding their performance at school, while other children receive too much pressure from their over enthusiastic parents which can have a negative impact on the child. Why do you think some parents put too much pressure on their children to perform well at school? What do you think the role of a parent should be in their child's education?

Enthusiastic
parents
have increased among certain demographics of society. These people claim that too much
care
for
children
is as beneficial for their activities at school as
such
is useful.
However
, rising issues seem to continuously loom over these prospects, which will be discussed below and I will offer my view.
To begin
,
parents
are always been wary of raising their
children
.
Therefore
, pupils get more
care
from their
parents
at educational institutes.
However
, too much effort and
care
mentally affect the
children
and become sick. Indeed , there have been some records, that if the parent
care
increases at school performance,
children
think, they should perform well and win, at the time they can effort too much and fear the activities increasing,
As a result
, they do not perform well .
Overall
, increasing, the excitement of pupil concern led to massive loss.
On the other hand
,
children
's education is most important for their future development.
Therefore
,
parents
of
children
wanted to support their generations.
However
,
this
care
should be limited,
otherwise
, they can not perform well.
For instance
, present day, in Sri Lanka, more students are getting good results at advanced levels
as well as
entering universities, whose
parents
are non-educated. It means, that
children
are limited to paying the tuition and without pressure from
parents
can achieve successfully.
To conclude
, parental
care
is important for every child.
However
,
this
affection needs to be controlled
otherwise
, it may lead to loss of life for their
children
.
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