The bar chart shows the numbers of cars per 1000 people in 5 European countries in three years and compaire with European everages.
This
graph shows us the changes in the count of cars
in 10 years.
Firstly
, you can see in country 4 the number of cars
was totally the same in the 10 years. In countries
1 and 2 the number of cars
in 2009 remarkably rose however
the average of 5 countries
hadn't risen which showed only two countries
economic increase.
Secondly
, Country 5 always had the highest counts of cars
thus
the average of 5 countries
of changes had directly connected with. The movement in the bars had changed in the same ways.
In conclusion, country 5 affected the average of 5 countries
the most because it had the largest number of cars
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