You would like to work in a different city to be closer to your family . Write a letter to your employer to request a transfer to another office. Explain why you would like to moveRequest that your employer place you in a specific city. Request that it be completed by a certain date.
Dear Mr Daniel,
I am writing
this
in regard to my concern about transferring my job location to my birthplace as it would allow me to be with my family. I feel disappointed for urging for my transfer.
However
, My marriage was arranged all of a sudden, things should be arranged so that the formalities would be well performed. Moreover
, My health condition is getting worse day by day, as I am consuming only outside food instead
of homemade, However
, I have no other option other than eating at a restaurant.
Certainly, If I would I had to mention a city that would please me to move might be Bangalore, which was a birthplace of mine. I request you to please transfer my job to that location with the same position as it would be here. Furthermore
, Our branch is located just 3km away from my home. Hence
, I feel it is a good place for me, according to
my health conditions.
It would be helpful if you could transfer me prior to my marriage date which will be celebrated on the 15th of September. Henceforth, I would request you to send me Bangalore before my marriage. I would be really grateful to you, it might also
help to improve my health. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
KaveriSubmitted by abram.yamini on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite