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Some people believe that it is best for people to be honest at all times. Others, however, believe that it is occasionally necessary to lie. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, society might be more sensible than it was before, so
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 why folks choose to hide the
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 from their loved ones,
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 the
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 that they are afraid of hurting their feelings,
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 Hiding the
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 all the time can cause a lot of troubles and even break up the trust that people have for their inner circle. In
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 essay, I will discuss the negative and positive sides of lying, and how can affect other's people sentiments. In my opinion, not being honest all the time can help you avoid hurting people,
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 the
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 that telling the
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 is not always pretty, and can be really harmful to some folks who are delicate and cannot bear the truthfulness about something.
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, mothers are not always honest with their children, owning to the
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 that they are scared of not hurting the children's feelings because they are small and some things they do not always understand so
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 why if you lie rarely is not considered bad.
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, not being honest with your inner circle can make the community grow apart from their loved ones,
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 the lack of trust.
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, always telling the
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 to your partner or friends can make the relationship stronger than before because
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 way you can see if you can trust someone with your problems and beliefs and make the bond more intimate and reliable.
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 why you should always be honest with your inner circle. In conclusion, it depends on each person if they are willing to be honest all the time or not , owning to the
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 that each person is responsible for their actions and they should acknowledge the consequences of each step they took, no matter if is bad or good.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • integrity
  • trustworthiness
  • credibility
  • transparency
  • accuracy
  • deception
  • ethical dilemmas
  • universal
  • moral absolutes
  • compassionate
  • sincerity
  • untruths
  • social harmony
  • cultural norms
  • situational factors
  • dishonesty
  • personal gain
  • relationships
  • consequences
  • context
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