The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from suagr can
The provided diagram illustrates 7 production stages when the
Sugar
is produced from Sugar
canes. Overall
, it is evident that Sugar
passes a wide range of long steps starting from planting Sugar
cane to consumption.
To begin
, as can be seen, the first step starts with planting the Sugar
cane over a period of 12-18 months growing span. The second step is harvesting the crop yield, this
step can be done either by farmers manually or by machine.After collecting the Sugar
cane, it is subjected to a crushing process to be converted to reed juice.
The produced juice passes through the other four essential stages to culminate. first one, pouring it in a limestone filter to purify it from any contaminations, then
it succumbed to heating to evaporate, resulting in heavy syrup and centrifuged to segregate the sugar
crystals and the syrup. The final stage is the sugar
has to be dried and cooled to become a final product for consumption.Submitted by alaan0542 on
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