The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2005 and the present day. Summarize the information by selecting the main features, and make comparisons.
The maps describe how the first floor of the art
gallery
has changed since 2005.
In 2005, the gallery
had 4 exhibition
rooms in total, 3 of which lined up on the east side, while
the other was to the left of the entrance
. Directly facing the entrance
was a round reception counter, immediately before the stairs in the north wing. A café could be in the northwest corner, with a gallery
office to its south.
Overall
, the art gallery
has been made more convenient with the addition of new facilities such
as a children’s area and a gallery
shop, albeit at the expense of some old features. Of particular note is the construction of a ramp for wheelchairs and a lift, which has made the gallery
more accessible to the disabled.
The gallery
's ground floor has seen some major changes over the years. Although
the exhibition
rooms along the east side remain intact, the fourth exhibition
room has been repurposed into a temporary exhibition
and a children’s area. The reception counter has been relocated to the centre, and it now faces the newly-built entrance
hall by the entrance
. The café and gallery
office have also
been converted into a gallery
shop and an area for a vending machine. Finally
, accessibility of the gallery
has greatly improved with the addition of a lift by the stairs and a ramp for wheelchairs to the left of the entrance
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