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Most of the people send text messages rather than calling. Explain the reasons for it. Do you think sending text message is an advantage or disadvantage?

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Sending
text
messages
 has become a trend among
people
instead
 of calling ,and there are numerous factors behind
this
 phenomenon.
This
 essay will highlight that
this
 is certainly advantageous despite a few inevitable drawbacks. Texting
people
 rather than calling is considered beneficial for several reasons. First and foremost,
messages
 are not only convenient but
also
 a formal way to convey information.
For example
, business leaders always prefer to
text
 over a call to fix their meeting times or to distribute tasks among employees.
As a result
, they are able to save their precious time by sending the same message to the workforce
while
 giving instructions on call to each individual is much more time-consuming.
In addition
, some folks take
text
messages
 as a fun activity since there are enormous applications nowadays be it Instagram or Snapchat which allow a person to add smiley faces to their
text
 to express their feelings more vividly.
That is
 why ,there is an inclination towards sending texts ,especially among youngsters. Paradoxically,
text
messages
 mean to use of mobile phone screens ,and using them regularly can cause health problems.
Hypermyopia
Correct your spelling
Hyper myopia
 is the most common eye effect that can be seen ,
this
 happens
due to
 the overuse of phones to send long
messages
 to friends and relatives.
In addition
, it is
also
 a reason for having headaches and bad posture ,
hence
 consuming social platforms to
text
 should be avoided at any cost.
Moreover
, distraction is the predominant disadvantage to using the phone for texting as when
people
 begin to
text
 someone,he is tend to consume other applications on mobiles ,and that's how they waste their energy and time on useless things for hours,
thus
 becoming less productive. In conclusion, even though
people
 prefer to
text
 for their entertainment and because they believe it is time-saving, it can cause trouble to the physical health of users and can affect
people
's work capabilities. So, civilians must be aware of the consequences of texting and start to call for urgent talk.
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