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Educaiton should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds. All levels of educaiton, from primary school to tertiary education, should be free. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

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Nowadays, many people believe that educational conditions should be free for all societies from rich to poor, because illiteracy has a lot of detrimental impacts on the countries,
this
 government should address
this
 issue.
This
 essay will note the reasons for
this
 comment. To institute, folks are supposed to learn about a work domain in the university either practically or theoretically, say so sad there are a lot of poor people in my country who can't spend money on university
such
 as tuition fees, buying beaks and renting a house or the dormitory If there are not any free universities, societies face many problems,
for example
, there is high unemployment, There is a sharp increase in poverty. 
On the other hand
, when a smart student has a good opportunity to go to the best university with professors who are the cream of the crap if their parents do not spend money on the academic area, they will reach their aims
as a consequence
 that person has the ability to help improve the countries and promote the knowledge.
In addition
, when it comes to free education for everybody,
this
 point should be mentioned the conditions are the same for everyone and based on their abilities. Not only are they not pressured with education expenses, but
also
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they can easily choose a major
that is
 based on talent. Taking into account of arguments, my point of view is that all people aught use free educational services because folks must have a degree that find a job
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