People think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are thaught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

With the world evolving nowadays, people are debating whether raising children in a competitive environment or a cooperative scene is better. Kids raised through fierce

competitions

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are more

skillful

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than others, but they lack the social skills required to be

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well-rounded

adult

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adults

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.

However

, children brought up in social groups learn necessary

soft-skills

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at a young age, laying a foundation for their future.

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essay will explore both sides

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and explain why I would rather raise my child to be socially active and a great cooperator. Competition pushes children to try their hardest. Recently, there

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a trend of

self improvement

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, encouraging teenagers to compete with others to be in their best physique, to excel in classes, and to have better test results. Kids who adopt

this

mindset are often the best students in their classes. They are smart and starve more competition.

For instance

, Timmy, after

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his midterm exams, has the drive to study harder and ace the

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exam.

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makes Timmy hungry for personal success and

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his journey on his own.

At the end

of the day, Timmy finds it difficult to fit in at work, since he has spent all his time competing against himself and others.

In contrast

, cooperating teaches numerous life lessons.

While

working as a team, they will learn basic social skills

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as communication, leadership, and empathy,

as well as

problem solving

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and other useful knowledge. They’d

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be exposed to

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different types of people.

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, Thomas,

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in groups since a young age, will be able to

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fit in at work. He’ll know how to deal with his boss, and

also

how to treat his coworkers. Cooperating at a young age allows them to discover themselves, and teaches them valuable skills. In conclusion, there isn’t a correct way to raise a child. Both the senses of competition and cooperation are valuable for youngsters.

However

, it is best to raise your kids to be

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well-rounded leader

that is

competent for leading their own lives.