Vaccinating children against preventable diseases is not only unnecessary but also dangerous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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diabetes
disabilities
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vaccination
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making
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continue
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, by vaccinating them they will be more Linking Words
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virus
viruses
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viruses
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disease
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viruses
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means that vaccinating our newborns is a good idea. Linking Words
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adults
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an increase
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vaccination
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old.
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neglecting
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newborn
dieases
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diseases
are
really dangerous for the world and their health, productivity and Correct subject-verb agreement
is
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. To explain, developed countries are made a healthy protectable program for their new generations. Use synonyms
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In conclusion, I agree with the importance of Correct your spelling
healthier
vaccination
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our new generation. As it gives them a healthy Change preposition
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a
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