WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter • describe the problem • say how long it has been a problem • explain what action you want the neighbour to take Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear John, I am writing to ask if the sounds made from your home could be turned down a little bit during weekdays, I would appreciate your kind. It has been almost three years since you have moved into the house, and we have a good bond since
then
.
However
, one thing I should tell you is that the uproarious sound from your visitors, sometimes friends,
may be
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a little louder, even higher than a decibel of 70. The condition has affected my quality of sleep, sometimes I need to take some pills to avoid suffering from insomnia. I know when people get high and share happiness may sometimes be out of control, but the frequency of
this
condition has been three months or so. Would you please remind your visitors to turn down the voices after ten p.m.? Or if you think you may not be able to handle it, I suggest that you could improve the hardware soundproof to reduce the noise poses a great issue with your neighbours. I am looking forward to your response and if you want to discuss
this
further
, feel free to contact me. Take care, Sherry
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coherence cohesion
Try to ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to improve clarity.
task achievement
To make your letter more professional, consider using more formal language.
task achievement
You have successfully identified and described the problem in a clear manner.
coherence cohesion
Your letter includes a proper greeting and closing, which adds to the overall structure.
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