The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries.
The table compares, the details about sales of Fairtrade labelled tea and pineapples in five different European countries in the years 2010 and 2015. To summarize, the sales of Fairtrade products were comparatively multiplied in a few countries in the
year
2015 and the rest are negligible. In the
year
2010, the product labelled tea sold about 4
million
euros and 2.5
million
euros in Austria and France respectively
whereas
,in the
year
2015, it rapidly increased. Followed by, 2.8
million
, 2
million
and 1.8
million
euros in Germany, the Netherlands and Norway in the
year
2010. On the flip side, in the
year
2015, tea purchased by the people was slightly improved. In the
year
2010, Fairtrade labelled pineapples were sold 16
million
, 2
million
and 1.6
million
in Austria, France and the Netherlands admittedly,
while
the same was doubled in the
year
2015.
On the contrary
, in Norway and
Germany
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it was higher in the
year
2015 where 2010 was insignificant.
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