Some people think that poverty is the reason for most of crimes. do you agree or disagree?
In today's era,
poverty
has become a main concern for most countries. Some people
think that poverty
is the cause of most crimes
. while
others disagree with this
statement. As far as I am concerned, I totally agree with this
statement. In this
essay, I will explain why I agree with this
and will provide examples to support my position.
Firstly
, Unemployment will lead to poverty
and then
it will come to crimes
. This
is because, when a country has a problem their young generation does not have jobs and work to do. That age group of people
have more energy and ability to earn money
than other age groups. When they do not earn money
due to
the unemployment problem in their country then
they choose the wrong path to get money
. For example
, a recent survey conducted in Dehli jail showed that most youngsters are kept in prison and all of them accepted that they did crime
because they did not have any other option to earn money
and were unemployed after their graduation.
Additionally
, most crimes
are committed by people
who do not have proper education. This
means, that people
who stand below the poverty
line always remain abandoned from a proper education. Lack of education in people
is also
a main cause of the increasing number of crimes
. To instantiate, a report by 'The Times of India' showed that 98% of people
who committed crimes
of rape were illiterate and this
happened because they did not go to school and learnt moral values and how to respect others. On the other hand
, some argue that there are other reasons for increasing the number of crimes
because some well-settled people
are also
in prison for their crimes
. In reality, those people
committed crimes
due to
their mindset ,not any social condition forced them to do it.
In conclusion, while
it is true that there is not a single reason for increasing the crime
rate, poverty
is playing the main role in today's crime
rate. Therefore
, I totally agree that a lower number of below-poverty
people
in any country will have a lower crime
rate.Submitted by yadvirk.999 on
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