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The graph below gives information about U.S government spending on research between 1980 and 2008

The graph below gives information about U.S government spending on research between 1980 and 2008
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The line graph illustrates the data about the
amount
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 of
money
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 spent by the government in the United States in some fields
such
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 as
health
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, space, energy, general
science
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, and
other
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others
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 during a 28-year period from 1980 to 2008.
Overall
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, there were many significant fluctuations during the period.
While
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 the US government spends a large
amount
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 of
money
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 on
health
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, the expenditure on general
science
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 was the lowest.
Besides
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, the other fields had a wild fluctuation between 1980 and 2008. It can be clearly observed from the chart that the expenditure on research into
health
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 was the highest at approximately $8
billion
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, which was nearly three times as high as that on general
science
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 in 1980.
Then
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, the spending on
health
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 research steadily declined to $7
billion
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 in the following four years before dramatically increasing to reach a peak of over $20
billion
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 in 2004, which was followed by a slight decrease of over $3
billion
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 in the final year.
By contrast
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, the
amount
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 of
money
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 spent on researching general
science
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 was the lowest during the period with a fluctuation between $2.5
billion
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 and $5
billion
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. In terms of the other categories, there was a moderate growth in the expenditure on space and energy
researches
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research
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 from nearly $6
billion
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 and $5
billion
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 in 1980 to roughly $10
billion
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 and $8
billion
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 in 2008, respectively.
However
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, the
amount
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 of
money
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 used for other research had a downward trend from $8
billion
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 to $5
billion
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 between 1980 and 2008.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, money, health, science, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • funding levels
  • government expenditure
  • trend analysis
  • budget allocation
  • inflation-adjusted dollars
  • historic highs/lows
  • research grants
  • public investment
  • financial resources
  • sector-specific spending
  • economic downturn
  • national priorities
  • scientific advancement
  • fiscal policy
  • economic stimulus
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