The two pie charts show the average spending by households in a country at two different points in its economic development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts show the average spending by households in a country at two different points in its economic development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts illustrate the average
percentage
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of nine spending
factors
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by households in a country in 1920 and 2020. In 1920, among all
expenditure
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factors
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,
food
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topped the chart. About 72% of the
household
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expenditure
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was spent on
food
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. Followed by “recreation and other items” and “fuel and light” cost 7.7% and 6.6% respectively. None of the rest of the
factors
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, including
household
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goods, clothing, housing, education, “travelling and communication”, and medical care, were over 3.5%. In 2020, The
percentage
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of
food
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spending dropped to 21.8%
while
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the group of recreation and other items showed a fourfold increase from 7.7% to 34.2%.
Similarly
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, travelling and communication went up considerably from 3.3% to 14.3%. In the 21st century, people were more willing to spend money on clothing, housing, education and medical care.
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, the
percentage
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of
household
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goods and “fuel and light” roughly remained the same.
Overall
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, in 1920 people spent most of their money on eating
instead
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of other
household
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expenditure
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factors
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.
However
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, after ten decades, the
percentage
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of each factor became more average.
Food
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became the second highest
expenditure
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while
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“recreation and other items” was the first.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, factors, expenditure, food, household with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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