The two pie charts show the average spending by households in a country at two different points in its economic development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts show the average spending by households in a country at two different points in its economic development.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts illustrate the average
percentage
of nine spending
factors
by households in a country in 1920 and 2020. In 1920, among all
expenditure
factors
,
food
topped the chart. About 72% of the
household
expenditure
was spent on
food
. Followed by “recreation and other items” and “fuel and light” cost 7.7% and 6.6% respectively. None of the rest of the
factors
, including
household
goods, clothing, housing, education, “travelling and communication”, and medical care, were over 3.5%. In 2020, The
percentage
of
food
spending dropped to 21.8%
while
the group of recreation and other items showed a fourfold increase from 7.7% to 34.2%.
Similarly
, travelling and communication went up considerably from 3.3% to 14.3%. In the 21st century, people were more willing to spend money on clothing, housing, education and medical care.
In addition
, the
percentage
of
household
goods and “fuel and light” roughly remained the same.
Overall
, in 1920 people spent most of their money on eating
instead
of other
household
expenditure
factors
.
However
, after ten decades, the
percentage
of each factor became more average.
Food
became the second highest
expenditure
while
“recreation and other items” was the first.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, factors, expenditure, food, household with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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