In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Urbanization

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has been a debatable topic in the world because it has been impacting the numbers of

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in rural

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. The advantages of shifting

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in the

city

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are better job

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and facilities than in rural

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.

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, the decreasing number of

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that live in urban

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would bring some burden

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as the strain on urban infrastructure. I wholeheartedly argue that

urbanization

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brings more negative effects.

People

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tend to move from rural

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to the cities to obtain better job

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and accommodation

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as healthcare and education.

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happens

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the fact that the advancement of facilities in urban

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is quicker than in rural

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and obviously, better amenities would ease

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in their daily lives.

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, in Gunung Kidul, Indonesia, job

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for

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with IT backgrounds are limited because

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area is not an industrialized area,

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almost 40% of locals are moving to the

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.

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the facilities and

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in the

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are better than in rural

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, rural-to-urban migration is not the only solution because there are negative sides to the

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shift. The

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shift makes the

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in

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decrease and it

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burdens the society because they lack of

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in productive ages.

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there are more chances in urban, the countryside itself has a basic livelihood that needs

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age and with

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, there are limited

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to help with the work.

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, in Gunung Kidul, Yogyakarta, where most

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folks are farmers, they need young age to help with the land,

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, most of the citizens move to

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the city

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and the land is left abandoned.

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,

urbanization

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has both positive and negative impacts.

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urban cities provide better amenities, it would be strained because of the rural-to-urban migration.

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, the equality of the development of infrastructure would be a better workaround for

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in rural

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because they could access what they need without moving to the

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.