A magazine wants to include contributions from its reader for an article called 'The book that influenced me most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. in your letter * describe what this book was about * explain how this book influenced you * say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to bring your attention to the

book

that changed my life.

This

book

had been

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writen

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written

by FERDOSI and the name of

this

book

is KING'S LETTER.

this

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novel

is related to the legends of IRAN. ,

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the writer focuses on a soldier ,who won a great deal number of wars during his life and lots of murders were

deafeted

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committed

against him. I have learnt many nice behaviours through

this

novel

. I understood how our ancestors defended our land against outside intruders and It developed my patriotism and taught me how to be braver, Before I read

this

novel

, I used to hate my country but now I'm really proud of my fatherland.

This

novel

can be useful for other people too, they will find out how much family and brotherhood is important in life. If

i

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was a teacher, I would force

on

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my student to save

this

story in their mind because the important point of

this

book

is helping poor humans and being kind

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useless

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person.

Although

it is not a true story, it is exciting. Thank you for your interesting magazine. yours faithfully SAED TAVAZOIE