A magazine wants to include contributions from its reader for an article called 'The book that influenced me most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. in your letter * describe what this book was about * explain how this book influenced you * say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to bring your attention to the

book

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that changed my life.

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writen

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written

by FERDOSI and the name of

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book

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is KING'S LETTER.

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this

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novel

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is related to the legends of IRAN. ,

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the writer focuses on a soldier ,who won a great deal number of wars during his life and lots of murders were

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committed

against him. I have learnt many nice behaviours through

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. I understood how our ancestors defended our land against outside intruders and It developed my patriotism and taught me how to be braver, Before I read

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, I used to hate my country but now I'm really proud of my fatherland.

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can be useful for other people too, they will find out how much family and brotherhood is important in life. If

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was a teacher, I would force

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my student to save

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story in their mind because the important point of

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book

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is helping poor humans and being kind

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useless

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person.

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it is not a true story, it is exciting. Thank you for your interesting magazine. yours faithfully SAED TAVAZOIE

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

198 words

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