Deforestation has been in increasing problem over the last few decades. What are the primary causes of deforestation? How we can solve the problem?

It is said that deforestation has been getting more and more severe over the past couple of decades.
This
essay will cover the causes of
this
problem,
such
as construction, and massive forest
fires
, which have been happening more frequently. Later, the solutions will be presented, one of them being creating more national parks and areas of forests that will be under the control of governments. For the past couple of years, the incidents of
fires
in the forest have been increasing in numbers. There are many examples of
such
fires
, and one
such
fire took place here in Kazakhstan. In June of
this
year, large forest
fires
broke out in the north region of Kazakhstan, and our country experienced the greatest annual death toll. Many people died whilst putting out those
fires
. The cause of
this
accident was lightning, but most often causes of
fires
are human factors, drought, and lack of fire service at the right time. A very frequent cause is people who light up bonfires to burn the trash they created whilst hiking and leave without putting it away. The
last
cause would be of course massive numbers of trees that are cut down for construction.
Such
companies don't look out for the state of the area afterwards, leaving it completely lifeless. Solutions to all of these causes have been present for a long time;
however
, not many of them were actually implemented.
For example
, to prevent the situation that happened in Kazakhstan, we should invest more in huntsmen and forestkeepers, providing them with reliable sources of communication with nearby emergency stations and compensating their living conditions with respective salaries. That
also
would help with reducing large
fires
caused by unthoughtful tourists and hikers. With corporations, I think, only restrictions and high taxes can help,
as well as
control groups patrolling areas of forests.
Additionally
,
such
corporations should be planting equal amounts if not more of trees they cut down.
To sum up
, deforestation has become a serious problem for our ecology, and the steps mentioned above should be taken into account and implemented over the following couple of years. Only that way we would be able to combat
such
ecological disaster.
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