The two maps show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities

The two maps show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities
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The
two
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maps illustrate the changes that are happening
in particular
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islands to be tourist facilities
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,
initially
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, the
island
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was unhabitable and it was not occupied by anyone.
Then
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it saws a huge converted to be a tourist attraction side. By adding accommodations,
two
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restaurants
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and a yacht club. The length of the
island
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is 100 meters. The green areas are preserved. The
island
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contained forests on the
two
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peripheral sides of the
island
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.
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to that beach. And a big desert.
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it adds to its accommodations near
two
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forests. The first accommodation compound is in a circle and all buildings are constructed around the circle . The houses are connected by a footpath. In the middle of the
island
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are added
two
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restaurants
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one of which is connected by a vehicle track road to the sea to be a yacht club. On the other peripheral side of the
island
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, other houses have been built near the beach and these houses are connected by other footpaths as well. The
restaurants
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are located in the middle to be near to them. Between the
two
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,
restaurants
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there are truck roads.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, island, restaurants with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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