The two maps show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities
The
two
maps illustrate the changes that are happening Use synonyms
in particular
islands to be tourist facilities
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Overall
, Linking Words
initially
, the Linking Words
island
was unhabitable and it was not occupied by anyone. Use synonyms
Then
it saws a huge converted to be a tourist attraction side. By adding accommodations, Linking Words
two
Use synonyms
restaurants
and a yacht club.
The length of the Use synonyms
island
is 100 meters. The green areas are preserved.
The Use synonyms
island
contained forests on the Use synonyms
two
peripheral sides of the Use synonyms
island
. Use synonyms
Additionally
to that beach. And a big desert.
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Then
it adds to its accommodations near Linking Words
two
forests. The first accommodation compound is in a circle and all buildings are constructed around the circle . The houses are connected by a footpath. In the middle of the Use synonyms
island
are added Use synonyms
two
Use synonyms
restaurants
one of which is connected by a vehicle track road to the sea to be a yacht club. On the other peripheral side of the Use synonyms
island
, other houses have been built near the beach and these houses are connected by other footpaths as well.
The Use synonyms
restaurants
are located in the middle to be near to them. Between the Use synonyms
two
,Use synonyms
restaurants
there are truck roads.Use synonyms
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