The charts below show the percentage in typical meals of three types if nutrient, all of which maybe unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the percentage in typical meals of three types if nutrient, all of which maybe unhealthy if eaten too much.
The pie charts illustrate the proportions of three harmful nutrients that are present in
breakfast
,
dinner
,
lunch
, and
snacks
. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the majority of
sodium
and saturated
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is consumed during
dinner
and
lunch
while
added sugar is mainly eaten in
snacks
. The percentage of three consumed ingredients during
the
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breakfast
is approximately constant for all three nutrients. In terms of
sodium
, the majority of
sodium
is consumed during
dinner
and
lunch
at 43% and 29%, respectively. During
breakfast
and
dinner
, the same amount of
sodium
is eaten with 14% for each of the categories.
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sodium
,
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between
dinner
and
lunch
is smaller, the majority of saturated fat is still consumed during the
dinner
(37%). Considering
snacks
and
breakfast
, the proportion
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saturated fat(37%) is 9% higher than
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Soidum (28%). In regards to the added sugar, 42% of it is eaten through
snacks
. The figure is almost twice as low for
dinner
and
lunch
, with 23% of added sugar consumed during
dinner
and 19% consumed during
lunch
. The figure for
the
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breakfast
is the same as for saturated fat, namely 16%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words breakfast, dinner, lunch, snacks, sodium with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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