A Museum Near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary / unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary / unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary / unpaid work. In your letter - explain why you want to do voluntary / unpaid work at the museum - describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful - give details of when you would be available for work

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My name is Shaini Wasana. Currently, I am studying physical science at Colombo University. I am writing

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to express my interest in the part-time unpaid job at the museum. I would like to join with position because it may help to collect information for my pending research.

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, I would like to get experience as an employee and communicate with foreigners to learn about their cultures. It is more beneficial for me to improve my English language.

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, I would like to explain about my qualifications and skills which I have. I have completed an ICT diploma including a Microsoft Office package that helps to keep records and I am following a Human resources course. Not only I can get printouts and photocopies but

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I have good communication skills.

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, I have prior experience with working together as a team. I think my skills and educational qualifications are very helpful for me to do

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so well. To be honest, nowadays I have to go to university for my studies on weekdays until 2 pm after 3 pm- 8 pm and on weekends that I am free. I hope to join above these times. My home is located near the museum and it is very convenient for me. If you could accept

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position for me, It would be great. My CV and cover letter are attached to the application form. If you have any questions about

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, please do not hesitate to contact me.

shainikellapathaThu Aug 31 2023

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The Greeting

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Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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6 paragraphs

250 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Enthusiastic
Volunteer
Part-time
Unpaid work
Museum director
Skills and qualities
Customer service
Organization
Team player
Flexible
Reliable
Positive attitude
Availability
Professional goals
Community contribution
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