Some people view conflict between teenagers and parents as a necessary part of growing up, while others view it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is undeniable that bringing up an adolescent is challenging for many
parents
, especially how to deal with an uncomfortable situation which is teenager’s
arguing. Change the noun form
teenagers
teenager
This
situation can be respond
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responded
in
different Change preposition
to in
way
by Fix the agreement mistake
ways
parents
. Some of them choose to face this
circumstance , while
others choose to avoid it . In my opinion, the conflict
that happen
Change the verb form
happens
among
teens and Change preposition
between
parents
is an
normal Change the article
a
problem
in the teenager
phase Replace the word
teenage
due to
the
biological and psychological changing and it should Correct article usage
apply
be manage
.
It is common knowledge that the biological and psychological changes that happen during the adolescent developmental period Change the verb form
be managed
brings
huge effects on Verb problem
have
the
teenagers. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, when they are a kid, a parent is a significant person who can help them with making decisions . However
, when they grow up, youths become more independent and have a different way
from their parents
to think about a problem
or live. Therefore
, when parents
and teens disagree about something, it can lead them into the
debate . Correct article usage
a
By standing
for their opinion is the Change preposition
Standing
way
to show their parents
that they have cognitive
ability to think and solve Add an article
the cognitive
the
particular Correct article usage
a
problem
.
Dealing with parent-teen conflict
circumstances is more important rather
than the Rephrase
apply
conflict
. The way
how
parent face Rephrase
apply
this
challenge can bring
impact Verb problem
apply
on
the youths to develop their Change preposition
apply
problem solving
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problem-solving
skill
. Fix the agreement mistake
skills
On the other hand
, parents
who showed
a good example to end the parent-teen Wrong verb form
show
conflict
by offering a win-win solution can teach youngsters how to solve the problem
and communicate with others in an appropriate way
. Otherwise
, parents
who tend to avoid these conflicts showed
their teens to not take responsibility.
Wrong verb form
show
To conclude
, as far as I am concerned , conflict
is a part of human life and it can happen in everyone's life . Therefore
, teaching youngsters to deal with the
conflicts is a good lesson for Correct article usage
apply
parents
to help their children survive in real life .Submitted by rizalestari on
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