Some people view conflict between teenagers and parents as a necessary part of growing up, while others view it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that bringing up an adolescent is challenging for many
parents
, especially how to deal with an uncomfortable situation which is
teenager’s
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arguing.
This
situation can be
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in
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different
way
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by
parents
. Some of them choose to face
this
circumstance ,
while
others choose to avoid it . In my opinion, the
conflict
that
happen
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among
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teens and
parents
is
an
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normal
problem
in the
teenager
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phase
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biological and psychological changing and it should
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. It is common knowledge that the biological and psychological changes that happen during the adolescent developmental period
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huge effects on
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teenagers.
For instance
, when they are a kid, a parent is a significant person who can help them with making decisions .
However
, when they grow up, youths become more independent and have a different
way
from their
parents
to think about a
problem
or live.
Therefore
, when
parents
and teens disagree about something, it can lead them into
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debate .
By standing
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for their opinion is the
way
to show their
parents
that they have
cognitive
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ability to think and solve
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particular
problem
. Dealing with parent-teen
conflict
circumstances is more important
rather
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than the
conflict
. The
way
how
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parent face
this
challenge can
bring
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impact
on
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the youths to develop their
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skill
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.
On the other hand
,
parents
who
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a good example to end the parent-teen
conflict
by offering a win-win solution can teach youngsters how to solve the
problem
and communicate with others in an appropriate
way
.
Otherwise
,
parents
who tend to avoid these conflicts
showed
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their teens to not take responsibility.
To conclude
, as far as I am concerned ,
conflict
is a part of human life and it can happen in everyone's life .
Therefore
, teaching youngsters to deal with
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conflicts is a good lesson for
parents
to help their children survive in real life .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • maturing
  • facilitates
  • independence
  • fosters
  • problem-solving skills
  • personal values
  • beliefs
  • potentially harmful
  • persistent misunderstandings
  • parent-child relationship
  • source of stress
  • anxiety
  • constructive conflict
  • managed
  • communication skills
  • fosters growth
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