Many feel going to the gym is the best way to stay fit . Others think there are more effective methods. Discuss both view and give your opinion

People hold different

viewst

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views

on which is the best way to achieve our desired body, working out in the

gym

or opting for

another approaches

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. Personally judging,

although

the former may be reasonable for us to some extent, I believe that the latter can save a lot of money

as well as

build more relationships for the same purpose. Whenever there is a wish

of staying

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fit, people

tends

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to choose

way

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that is

more likely to have quick outcomes, and

gym

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the gym

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is probably the most common choice, regardless of

high

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price.

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is because

,

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everything ranging from fitness

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selection to work-out plans is readily prepared for you when becoming a member of a nearby

gym

centre. With the trainer's direct guidance and supervision, you will do weight training for a short time, it is soon to expect the result.

Nevertheless

, I agree that other bodyweight training is more effective in staying fit because of light physical activities in keeping with our energy.

This

is because of flexibility in exercise , we can control movement appropriate for ourselves .

Besides

, there are many exercises that do not go to the fitness centre, which

lead

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to reduced cost of living.

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,

while

the

gym

brings us an athletic body with weight equipment , women and elders can choose cycling , aerobics, yoga, cardio.... to have a flexible body , avoid heart disease, and get rid of fat . To summarize, the

gym

is the best way to keep fit thought by many

as a consequence

of getting results quickly.

However

, it is my opinion that there are many ways to keep healthy not only hitting the

gym

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of other light physical activities suitable for each person.