Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Since the dawn of, times wild
animals
have been kept in zoos
all over the world. This
is a controversial issue. At present, zoos
are tourist attractions in many countries and need wild animals
to attract visitors. I believe that they should not be kept in zoos
and there should be alternative places to see them. This
essay will discuss both sides and an opinion will be put forth. There are many good reasons to not build zoos
in our cities. 1) First of all, god’s precious gifts need to live in their natural habitat. Furthermore
, zoos
are no place for wild things. If animals
need to be cared for, they should be looked after in their natural habitat in game parks or wildlife reserves. Governments should look after the precious wild animals
in their country and should close down zoos
that profit from them. 2) Another valid reason to support this
view is that people can see wild animals
on the internet, or in books. They don’t need to visit them in cages where they are sick or dying. Moreover
, These zoos
try to make money from animals
' misery and they don’t care about the animals
' welfare. Recent research at Harvard shows that 89% of all wild animals
die in cages. 3) In addition
to this
, we should allow animals
to live in the wild. They can be healthy in their own habitat, they can hunt and have normal behaviour. They cannot do this
in a zoo. In the future, if a man wants to see wild animals
, we must travel to their country and see them in the wild in their environment and not ours.
In a nutshell, people believe that zoos
are good places to keep wild animals
, I feel that we do not need zoos
anymore and we can look at wild animals
on the internet or travel there and we can be happy for these wild creatures.Submitted by ryskulovstreet on
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task response
Address the question fully and directly. Provide a clear opinion on the issue and develop the main ideas with relevant, specific examples.
coherence and cohesion
Organize information and ideas logically with a clear introduction and conclusion.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite