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that these days there is no
among
people
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their ancient culture,
while
it has been stated that protecting the traditional
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life, especially the ones that
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to their country, is
vital. I think that individuals should not forget their
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traditions and customs.
On one hand, one group of
people
believe that the interest
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knowing about the past has been demolished.
Firstly
, we live in a global
world
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among
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people
around the
world
. Because of
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some improvements in transportation between different countries and even between
, visitors and local
people
have some interacts and relationship together.
For example
, India, which is a country with
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tourists per year, has changed significantly during the past few decades. Indian citizens used to wear Sari
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, but because of
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European and American tourists, the way of wearing clothes among them
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significantly changed.
Secondly
, technology, especially the internet has contributed the countries to
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unmixed, uniformed and united
world
. In order to
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, some special
such
as genes, cultural habits and
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of skin would not have a
result in
people
's desires and
.
On the other hand
, another group of
people
think that the culture and
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of every single country must be protected and continued by their citizens. There are some cultural occasions
such
as
ceremonies, celebrations and
, which are important for the local citizens of every
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.
For instance
, In Iran, we celebrate the new year with the initial days of the spring and we have some customs to
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it in our way. If these kinds of old and traditional events
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been forgotten, they would have
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centuries. I think that older generations should determine
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amount of time to teach these innate and
traditions and cultures to the next generation, in order to
them from disappearing.
In conclusion, because of the improvement in technology and the transportation facilities
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as
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, nowadays we live in an unmixed and
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world
without any differences among
people
with different cultures.
However
, I believe that old there
be some solutions to protect the traditional way of living and our
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customs from demolishing.