Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Nowadays

celebrities

earn more money than

politicians

is becoming more widespread in many parts of the world.

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essay will examine

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reasons

as well as

the positive and negative development of

this

tendency. There are a variety of different causes for

this

matter.

To begin

with,

celebrities

have more influence on

people

than

the

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politicians

, because

people

are usually

intersted

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interested

in the things they like, so they can easily spend money on their favourite

celebrities

or famous

people

. A good example is that

korean

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celebrities

receive

high

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a high

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salary

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salaries

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because they

make

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have

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a good

influece

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influence

through the images or the

works

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work

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they participate in. Another

contributuing

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contributing

factor to mention is that

politicians

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politicians'

politician's

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job

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jobs

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are more difficult and it's harder to make money, they need to create appropriate policies, have to attend many meetings

continously

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continuously

and their salaries are mainly taxes of the

people

. In my opinion,

this

phenomenon can bring negative development for the

politicians

.

Firstly

,

this

can

reduces

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the importance of political works. Because

,

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the

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politicians

are not pay

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are not paid

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enough, many

peope

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people

will have a negative view of

this

career.

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reality

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example is that we can easily see that the number of

people

taking political classes has decreased,

meanwhile

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music or acting courses have a high participation rate

instead

,

this

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also

show

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the influence of

this

factor.

Secondly

, the fact that politics is not appreciated is a danger, because if there are only

few

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a few

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people

who have

interest

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an interest

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or

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in or

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study politics, in the future, those who are able to run the

countri

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country

are

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very few.

Politicians

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jobs are poorly recognized and underpaid. In conclusion,

celebrities

earn

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earning

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more than

politicians

is a phenomenon that

have

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a lot of

disadvatages

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disadvantages

and negative

affects

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effects

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,

this

could spoil the images of the

politicians

who working hard to achieve success.