Task 1: The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Task 1: The diagram shows how chocolate is produced.
The diagram illustrates the process of producing chocolates.Mainly it depicts the ten procedures needed to make it.Following by ,solid to liquid transformation happens.
The foremost step is,to collect the ripe cocoa fruit from the tree. After that, break the harvested pods and collect the white seed inside it.Following ,the seeds undergo a fermentation process.
Further
,the white part of the fruit is spread in a sheet under the sun for drying.Then
the dry ones are packed in a sack and forwarded for transport.Followed by,moving on to a truck for transport.
Then
,after reaching the factory .The beans are collected and put into an oven.Even more, the cocoa beans get roasted up to a temperature of 350 degrees Celsius.Subsequently
, the beans are put into a processor where it has been crushed and the outer shell has been removed.Next,
the shell removed part is pressed in a grinder .Then
,the liquid -chocolate is produced.Submitted by insighttribez on
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