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some sporting events are fomouse .It is positive or negative effect. give your opinion

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As we can see, some
sports
activities
 attract more attention than others.
For example
, the Super Bowls are more renowned than powerlifting plays. I think the drawbacks of
this
 phenomenon outweigh the merits.
To begin
 with, under the unequal reputation, audiences might be hurt that they may lose chances to understand and observe the unfamous, but excellent competitions
due to
 under-promoted.
For example
, powerlifting as a sport encourages
competitors
 to lift weights as heavy as they can and it endows audiences the excellent watching experience, but rare people know it
due to
 unfamous. Meanwhile, as resources usually lean to attract sporting events, those rare-known
activities
 may fail to hold because of the shortage of resources.
Secondly
,
competitors
 in different
sports
 might have unequal growing opportunities. Athletes in renowned
sports
 commonly have higher incomes, reputations and sponsors that can support their careers.
In contrast
,
competitors
 in unpopular
sports
 usually work another part-time job and suffer in distracted from their training.
For instance
, almost all powerlifters are hard in solely living on competition because sponsors are more into eye-attracted plays.
Therefore
, some athletes are forced to pause their training and go to work to earn bread.
On the other hand
, the reputation surely benefits the
activities
 , like helping
activities
 grow.
For example
, the success of the Super Bowl is mainly relying on its reputation.
Furthermore
, the Super Bowl feeds back a better-watching experience to the gathering.
Overall
,
although
 the fame of some
sports
 has few merits, I stick with my proposal that it hurts the development of some
competitors
 and gatherings to have more chances to enjoy broader
sports
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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