Reading comics only rot the children’s mind than to provide any good education . how far do you agree /disagree with this?

On

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of the leisure things youngsters love to do nowadays is

reading

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comics

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online or the material itself. It has been argued that it has no benefits to the

children

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and does not contribute to their studies. I agree with the above notion and

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essay will discuss the reasons.

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with, reading should be a habit a child should practice at

the

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early age. Reading should be fun and educational. Every

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children

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should

be encourage

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to read

boooks

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books

or articles

not

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comics

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. The

books

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aid the reader to obtain more knowledge,explore different ideas and

helps

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to

widened

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their vocabulary as well.

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,

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the technological advances that we have, many young ones

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already exposed to

comics

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online. There were comic

books

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before but the new era offers everything online including reading

comics

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too.

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,

this

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gives

an

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easy access to

children

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to

comics

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instead

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of buying comic

books

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.

Comics

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is

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their one way to cope

up

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with their peers, depending on what is on the market and

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is how they relieve stress.

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, we cannot ignore the fact that

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hinders the study

habit

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habits

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of a student.

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, after school a child should be reviewing his or her lesson but what

happen

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is,

most

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that most

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of them engage themselves in their own gadgets and watch videos or read

comics

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online. So,

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habit can really

affects

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their school performance.

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,buying comic

books

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cause

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a lot of

fortunes

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especially

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to

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for

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students

whom

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the

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main source of income is their allowances.

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sets

as

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a bad example for students at

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young age to spend their money on these things which are not essential. They should learn how to manage their finances to avoid future

crisis

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.

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, if a student was given an

alowance

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allowance

to buy a meal, he or she would rather not eat as long as he can buy the latest update on her or his favorite comic book.

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, doing

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can

also

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affects

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their health by not eating right.

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,

i

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fully agree that comic

books

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do no good to

children

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but only for fun,

self gratification

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and a waste of money.

Comics

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obsession can

also

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affects

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affect

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their studies and health.They should focus more on reading good

books

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and materials that will help them

on

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in

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their studies and

leads

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lead

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them to become

a well-rounded individuals

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well-rounded individuals

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.