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Nowadays many teenagers involve in crime. What are the causes for this?

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The
crime
 rate has increased currently among the youth. There are major reasons that
this
 issue has risen and more importantly, there are effective ways to overcome
this
 problem. The young adults committing criminal activities can be considered to be more impulsive and impatient to earn money through legal ways. As emotions have a fundamental impact on their decision-making, they have the tendency to act without thinking. There are surveys in the US examining the relationship between the role of impulsive action and the
crime
 rate. The results were quite shocking since they showed the direct influence of
this
 trait on the level of
crime
.
Moreover
, young people are in a rush to gain what they need. Sometimes
this
 may cause engaging in illegal activities
such
 as robbery or drug- trafficking which they can make much more money in a short time. Unfortunately, not having enough patience and not thinking about the consequences of their actions may increase the chance of involvement in crimes. To reduce the
crime
 rate, teaching critical thinking and providing job opportunities can positively affect the young's lives. Many of their choices are emotion-oriented without knowing what the possible consequences would be. Teaching them social skills, including thinking accurately can be life-changing. What can help them is to clear the situation by bringing some examples to attract their attention to what would be followed as the results. In Japan, there are numerous animations stimulating the exact situation to offer a comprehensive understanding of the consequences of decisions made to enhance thinking critically.
Moreover
, by offering different occupations in accordance with the young's needs, the reduction of the commitment to
crime
 is expected, as they can be financially stable. In conclusion,
Due to
 the impulsivity and impatience of the youth, the number of persons involved in criminal activities has sore in the moment. Employment and education can be suggested to solve
this
 concern.
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