Friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern era,
individuals
make
friends
by
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the help of social
sites
, but
there
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friendships
are not
so
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true as
like
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the
friends
who meet with each other. I completely agree with the statement because
people
do not know anything about the
life
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lives
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of other persons, and
also
people
can not express their emotions clearly. On the one hand, online
friendships
are not so good as
individuals
do not know about each other. To make it more precise, on various social media applications, many
people
give their fake information, so
others
have no idea whether
this
information is relevant or not.
Apart from
this
, sometimes some
people
become
friends
with
others
to trap them in their fraud,
that
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is why online
friendships
are not meaningful.
For example
,
according to
a survey, many hackers by the use of different
sites
make
friends
,
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and
then
hack their social media accounts to blackmail them for money.
On the other hand
, in the online
modes
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people
can not see the other
persons
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person's
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emotion
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emotions
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clearly. To elaborate
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it
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, most
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of
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the
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people
play with
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others'
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others
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feelings only for their entertainment, and some
individuals
tell
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lie
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to gain the sympathy of
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other
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another
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other
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persons
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.
In addition
,
people
express their
personality
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personalities
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totally
different
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differently
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to the original on
the
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social
sites
. To exemplify,
according to
an article
of
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"The Hindustan Times", most
of
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the
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online
friendships
are broken nowadays because of the fake feelings that
people
show towards each other. In
conclusions
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, in my opinion, I strongly agree
with
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that
the
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online
friendships
are not so meaningful because
people
do not know exactly about each other , and most
of
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the
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individuals
cannot understand
the
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feelings towards
the
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others
as so
much
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fake illustrations are on
the
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apply
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online
sites
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • non-verbal communication cues
  • depth of understanding
  • spontaneous
  • genuine moments
  • shared interests
  • sense of physical presence
  • evolve
  • constant connectivity
  • nurture friendships
  • busy schedules
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