Q. Some people think planting trees in open spaces in cities and towns is more important than building houses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been argued that people should be gardening in remote areas, big cities and towns it plays an essential role as compared to constructing apartments. I partially agree with

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given statement and

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essay shall shed light upon my perspective in subsequent paragraphs. Foremost, Why planting

trees

in open spaces in cities and towns is much

important

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than building houses?

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is because

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the cultivation of more

trees

in urban settings benefits city dwellers in a variety of ways.

For example

, extra tree shade is generated when more

trees

are planted in open areas, which not only promotes the aesthetics of the city but

also

helps to lower the city's temperature.

Also

, it provides more space

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elders and youngsters to do some physical activities in

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relaxing environment.

Besides

this

, these plants assist in reducing urban air pollution and noise levels and promote higher living standards. Paradoxically, the fundamental reason behind my disagreement is that if houses are not built in big cities or villages, people may become homeless. No doubt, it is a better thing to plant

trees

in every area,

however

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it has an adverse impact on people's lives they might suffer from urbanization.

For instance

, a survey conducted by Harward University revealed that in Punjab 65% of the population

love

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loves

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to plant

trees

on roads and open areas, but with

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they are facing problems related to living at

homes

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.

To conclude

,

although

building houses is a good thing for commoners, I personally believe that planting

trees

gives more advantages to the atmosphere and an individual's life.