Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Governments have to
choice
between Replace the word
choose
railways
or road spending the government’s budget. Someone used to Use synonyms
tell
roads Verb problem
say
is
more useful than Correct subject-verb agreement
are
railways
. But I Use synonyms
am not agree
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do not agree
that
opinion. I think that if invest Change preposition
with that
to
rail than others, we can have more benefits. Change preposition
in
This
essay is going to talk about why spending Linking Words
money
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in
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on
railways
is more helpful Use synonyms
us
.
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to us
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the one hand, the Correct your spelling
On
train
have been usedUse synonyms
a
lot of people than other transport Change preposition
by a
such
as cars. It is the Linking Words
first’reason
we use more Correct your spelling
first reason
first season
money
than roads. These profits Use synonyms
not
limit only people. The Change the verb form
do not
did not
man made
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man-made
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trains
train
, we can move a great number of goods Fix the agreement mistake
trains
easier
and Rephrase
more easily
safer
. Costing to Replace the word
safely
train
rail, we can get much more social benefits with small Use synonyms
money
. Use synonyms
Also
if we pay for rails, we can use trains more various means. Nowadays, trains Linking Words
is
no longer a means of transportation. Through a special concept Change the verb form
are
train
trip; like Use synonyms
Swiss
or Correct article usage
a Swiss
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French
train
, travel travelers gain a unique experience. Some people don't hesitate to spend a lot of Use synonyms
money
on Use synonyms
such
things.
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On the other hand
, it has a big advantage Linking Words
other
transports in terms of environment. Once the Change preposition
over other
train
is built, it can be used longer than other means of transportation, Use synonyms
such
as cars. Recycling of resources is Linking Words
eco friendly
. Add a hyphen
eco-friendly
However
, since the rail track is vulnerable to heat, continuous repairs are needed through more investment. Linking Words
Aslo
, by using Correct your spelling
Also
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train
when carrying a large amount of cargo, we Correct article usage
a train
able
to consume less coral or oil than the truck. Add a missing verb
are able
Moreover
, the development of Linking Words
magnetic
levitation Correct article usage
a magnetic
train
will Use synonyms
be maximize
Change the verb form
maximize
this
aspect.
In conclusion, Spending more Linking Words
money
on Use synonyms
railways
is more helpful socially, culturally and environmentally. I talked about two comments to prove it. So we must not hesitate to invest in Use synonyms
this
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite