In recent years, the family structure has changed as well as family roles, what are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative ? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant from your own knowledge or experience.
In
this
era of modernisation, everyone wants to be a part of a small or a nuclear family ,not a joint family. Over the past few years, the family responsibilities and the size of a family have changed. This
essay will discuss how the size and the living preferences are changed along with
the detail of how these changes are affecting the values
, and the respect
towards the elders
negatively.
To begin
with, the first main change which occurs due to
today's role of the family is that most of the youngsters
do not want to live with their parents
or grandparents. Because, they want their own privacy and maybe their separate home where they can live as they want, and it happens just because of their parent's attitude towards grandparents. For example
, most working people do not have to take care of their elders
due to
their hectic schedules, and the first role model of youngsters
is their parents
, so they just follow their parents
, and as a result
, they want to live separately.
Moreover
, these changes are not good in terms of values
and respect
for the elders
. For instance
, if youngsters
do not share how with their parents
or grandparents, then
they might not be able to learn and know the traditions and values
regarding their roots, because at an early ,age they get separated from their elders
, so they do not get any chance to know their customs and values
from their ancestors. Also
, with that, the new generation will not give respect
to their parents
, because they might think they are living with them and they do not have any need to get involved with their parents
.
To conclude
, this
essay discussed how the structure of today's families is affecting the size of the family and living preferences of the youngsters
, and how these affect the values
and respect
for the elders
. In my opinion, I think the modern structure has negative effects on the young generation.Submitted by itzgurpreetsingh1 on
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task response
The introduction should clearly state the writer's position on the topic. The body paragraphs should provide more specific examples and reasons to support the writer's opinion. Make sure to address both aspects of the topic (positive and negative changes).
coherence cohesion
The essay lacks a clear overall structure. Make sure to use appropriate linking words and phrases to connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs. Also, use a wider range of cohesive devices such as pronouns, conjunctions, and transition words.
Your opinion
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