Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people believe that it is too late to do something while others believe the actions can be taken to improve the situation. Discuss both the prospectives and give your opinion.
Anthropogenic activities have devastating effects on the environment. Some individuals reckon that the right time is gone to handle
this
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while
others rely on the protection method. Linking Words
According to
the former view, the maximum number of species of plants and animals are destroyed, but efforts should be taken to raise them.
On the one hand, human actions cause detrimental impacts on nature and because of ,that a huge population of flora and fauna has gone extinct. To make it more clear, Linking Words
due to
the increasing level of several man-made acts Linking Words
such
as deforestation, pollution, and urbanization, it is now impossible to take measures to preserve living creatures. Linking Words
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this
, the masses are not aware of the importance of other breeds. Linking Words
For instance
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according to
a survey by Cambridge University, around 6 million hectares of land were lost from forest to agriculture which is hard to recover at the present time.
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On the other hand
, many persons deem that necessary steps could be applied by the governments and nature specialists. The first and foremost way is afforestation, as trees hold ample varieties of life forms, and these are Linking Words
also
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Secondly
, strict policies are made to control pollution in large cities and towns. To exemplify,in an article in "The Hindustan Times", in India, higher authorities passed the conservation act to boost the biodiversity of the country.
In conclusion, in my opinion, I admit the viewpoint that initiatives can be used to develop the ecosystem, and these totally depend on the circumstances of any nation.Linking Words
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task response
The essay presents both perspectives effectively and provides a clear opinion at the end. However, some points lack development and clarity.
coherence cohesion
The logical structure and the introduction and conclusion are well presented. However, some ideas lack coherence and could be developed further.
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