Many government think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Economic
progress
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should be an
imporatant
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important
goal for every
nation
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but other goals are
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equally important for a
country
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. Other
progress
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like education
development
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, social
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and much more. In my own opinion, all
types
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of
progress
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are equally important for a
country
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. , Economic
progress
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plays
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great role in a
nation
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's
development
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. If a
nation
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will grow
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by
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it
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economic
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then
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lots of other
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development
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developments
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will take place.
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, if a
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country
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public health
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good and they will eat more and more
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from that
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viewpoint
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economic
progress
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plays
an
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great role. Economic
development
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is
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needed for a
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country
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progress
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. If economic
grow
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will take place
then
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other
development
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will
also
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take place in a
nation
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. , Other
types
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of
progress
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are
also
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equally important like for a
countries
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development
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.
Progress
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like educational
development
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, growth in health, grow in the age
to
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people,
development
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in population and increase in GDP
such
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king
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kind
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of
development
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is
also
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needed.
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, if a
country
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will grow
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grows
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in all
kind
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kinds
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of
development
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then
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it becomes easy
as well as
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fast for a
country
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to become
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rich in all
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.
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, the government should invest in all filled.
Public
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should support a
nation
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by saving
nature
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resoucres
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resources
and helping poor people.
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, the above information describes
about
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the
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all
types
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of
progress
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are
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that are
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needed for the
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nation
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growth.
Hence
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, in my own opinion, all
types
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of
progress
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are equally
imporatant
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important
for a
country
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. Even, economic
progress
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is
also
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important
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an important
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goal.
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  • socio-economic development
  • quality of life
  • stakeholder
  • sustainable development
  • public sector
  • non-governmental organization (NGO)
  • civic engagement
  • green technology
  • quality of education
  • universal healthcare
  • cultural integrity
  • global competitiveness
  • human capital
  • innovation ecosystem
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