You have been working with your company for two years and are interested in a promotion. Write a letter to your direct boss. In your letter: · Explain your varied achievements over the past two years · Express your interest in growing with the company · Ask for a meeting to discuss a potential promotion

#company #two #years #promotion #boss #achievements #interest

Dear Mr. Brown, I am writing

this

letter to draw your immediate attention to my desire for promotion. You are aware that I have been working for your corporation for the

last

two years and I work hard to accomplish the goals of the company on time.

In addition

, I have made many achievements in these years. I was rewarded as a cooperative and punctual employee of the firm and some multinational companies

also

praised my dedication towards the work. I am quite satisfied with the position for which I am currently working but I want to grow myself

according to

my potential.

Moreover

, the company has a good reputation in the market and I am proud to be an employee of the firm. I want you to schedule a meeting with me so that we can discuss

further

about

this

and make a mutual decision on a potential promotion suitable for me. I thank you in anticipation and look forward to a positive response. Yours Sincerely, Sonia

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7 paragraphs

168 words

8.50

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Clear and correct grammar

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