In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It has become a common practice amongst people to
use
electronic
books
than hard copies.
This
obviously has some benefits and
downside
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to it. I will say it is more advantageous to
use
soft copy
version
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of paper
books
.
To begin
with, the availability of soft copies has made
information
easily accessible. People can get
information
on electronic data anywhere and at
anytime
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. It creates some flexibility and individuals can read whilst on a transport or even at a party. It depends on the person.
Secondly
,
such
sources of
information
are relatively cheap. It
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nothing or very little to own an electronic book compared to a hard copy version.
This
has lessened the burden parents had to go through to meet the educational needs of their wards.
Finally
, the
use
of soft copies reduces the incidences of back pain. I recall most of
mates
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had back pain from having to carry lots of
books
in the 1990s to school.
This
health problem is a thing of the past as the modern student only carries a
light weighted
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electronic gadget to school and is able to perform as required by the school.
Although
it seems the
use
of
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books
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many gains, they are not without drawbacks. A leading disadvantage is
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and reduced vision from prolonged screen time. There have been reports of persons developing headaches and blurred sight from constant reading using
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mobile devices or laptops. Experts say
this
is true and
advice
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frequent breaks during studies on these devices to avoid
this
problem.
Also
, the thought of accessing
information
as and when needed has minimised the ability of today's
student
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to retain
information
as there's a notion of why
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need to commit some vital
information
to memory when it can be obtained just a click away. The downside to
this
is poor network making it difficult to retrieve vital
information
in a timely fashion.
Lastly
, there are
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notifications on
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electronic gadgets that can distract our studies. A person may end up learning nothing even though that was the original intent
due to
these distractions that can occur with the
use
of those devices.
To sum up
, it is evident that in as much as the
use
of
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books
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significant benefits, it is not without drawbacks but worth remembering the advantages
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the disadvantages.
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