The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and2022

The bar graph shows the percentages

about

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population

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the population

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in Iceland in the

year

1990 to 2020

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, the youth of ice land generation increased throughout

these

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year

. All of the

age

groups experienced

the

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fluctuation in the

population

and the old people constaint decreased

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followed by the teenage group. The

age

between 25-54

population

was highest in the

year

1990

about

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31% and it

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slightly increased throughout the

year

and reached

to

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35%.

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in 2020 it was the highest

population

in Iceland rose up to 49%.

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, the

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children

growth was 28% in 1990 and remained

constaint

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constant

constraint

in 2000. But in 2010 decreased by

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approximately

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experienced declined

steady

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throughout the

year

. The old

age

people and teenage

population

was around 12% and 21% in 1990. It

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declined by almost 2% in

the

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both

age

group

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groups

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in the

year

2000.

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, it is experienced

constaint

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constant

constraint

downward in the people and reach about less than 10%